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Underground railway system in different cities - main features and comparisons where relevant.


Bunglon11 28 / 31 5  
Feb 20, 2016   #1
The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A breakdown of the information system of the underground railway in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles since opened in different years, and is measured by kilometres (km) of the route and millions of passengers per year. At first glance, there was a significant dominance in the number of passengers among the cities. While the highest number was shown by Tokyo, Kyoto presented the reverse.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, the highest number of passengers was dominated by Tokyo, which was opened in 1927 with route 155 km, 1927 million passengers. In contrary, the shortest route and lowest passengers were experienced by Kyoto since it has been promoted in 1981, which was followed by Los Angeles, as the newest opened in 2001, and Washington DC in 1976, that had 50 and 144 million passengers.

Turning to the next analysis, Opened in 1900 with 199km length, Paris attracted 1191 million of passengers. Interestingly, London, which had the longest route around 394km length, had passengers 775 million since it was published in 1863.



awe_28 25 / 10 6  
Feb 20, 2016   #2
Hi Bunglon, here is my correction :)

A breakdown of the information system of(breakdown has same meaning with explanaiton or information) the underground railway SYSTEM in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los AngelesSIX DIFFERENT REGIONS(You can mention the cities if it is not more than three) since

...which was opened in 1927 with route 155 km AND 1927 million passengers.


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