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So if I emphasize the culture tradation and famous buildings that are in tourist spot, the essay will be better.
Well.... in the introduction you need to introduce the title in its original sense. This prompt says;
Some people think that culture traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed to tourists.
Here the focus is not how culture and traditions would be affected by using them for generating income in the tourist industry. Let me do a sample introduction for you;
Tourism, without any doubt, helps boost a country's economy. (this is your hook and then you need to link it to the background of the issue and introduce it to the reader)
It is often seen that many host nations use their culture and traditions to attract tourists and generate income out of them. However, some people view this as a threat that leads to losing the cultural identity of the host nation by catering for the perceived needs of tourists. (this is the background of the issue)
Now state your opinion on this;
I personally believe that ???????