I support to this opinion, overpopulation is creating problems in all over the world. Many kinds of harmful effects are being raised not only in the poor and undeveloped country but also well developed state. Reducing the amount of foods, increasing rate of unemployment, damaging environment effects are seen clearly due to the population growth.
In the first hand, many people are affected by poverty in the undeveloped nation. Firstly, dramatic increased population, also have been increased shortage rate of foods
. (<---Rephrase this sentence my friend. Its isn't grammatically correct I think). Lots amount of foods have to consume however production is limited
. (Lots of amount of food is consumed........) Secondly, unemployment ratio is growing day by day which is also cause
(because) of growing size of population. Thus, such kind of problems invites "economic crises
(crisis)" in the countries.
(On the) other hand, developed and industrialized countries (are) also not far from this problem. The first problem
)(it) is hard to maintain public service properly
(for) their citizen. Second problem is, crime is also arising with the higher density of population. In fact, with the growing competition, people are searching new way to survive and they are adopting wrong approaches. Third one problem
( this formation doesn't seem correct), environment can be damaged due to the overpopulation. Likewise, Global warming, Climate changes (are) also effects of growing population.
However, we can minimize
(these) problems to some extent. First of all, it is necessary to give education to the people especially to women. Similarly, governments also have to (set) regulation for birth limit. China has the policy to (one parent :one child) one child ratio. This type
of policy helps to control population. Eventually, similar policy might also be necessary in over
(crowded) nations as India for example.
In conclusion, overpopulation creates
(dangerous) effects for human beings so we have to be more conscious to mitigate this problem in
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