The civilization of
- what do you imply to by using our? Human beings do not belong to anybody.- human beings has developed for a long time with the help of the science and technology. Nowadays, people can communicate information through various mediums such as books
, radio and television,
and so on. These three mediums are the most popular ones that we are using everyday and almost cannot
live without them.A
book - you cannot use a countable noun without article. I advise you to use the plural form of the word "book" in this paragraph, as it sounds better and is more convenient - is the conventional medium
for people to spread the information,
and it has been existing for thousands years. People can get huge amount of knowledge, predecessors' experience and historical lessons from books. However, in the current time, books
to be out of date, because they
long time for
editing, printing and publishing. Therefore, it cannot
catch up the latest changes all around the world.
On the other hand, it has its own limitation. People can hear things through radio, but sometimes
language can not explain things
and some audience can
misunderstand the content maybe just be
cause of missing one word.
Thus, TV was invented. Television can solve most of the misunderstandings and also help people get information not only through the
sound but also the vision. This is a really
good medium to communicate information, but unfortunately some new problems are raised on this communication platform such as too
many violent programs
etc. All these kinds
of information should be well controlled to the younger generation.
All in all, compared with other tow - this word does not match its place- media
, I believe that TV is the most effective one for communicating information.
You should expand on the last paragraphs, by repeating your reasons; it is too short. Add few supportive sentences to the para devoted to television, as you in favour of it. The reasons that you brought there for its effectiveness are not completely persuasive.