...I would learn lots of thing
s from...motivate me in my work as
an electronic engineer in the future. (Maybe you should pay more attention to the use of indefinite article. I just pointed out one of the similar mistakes. ^_^)
...I can hardly imagine what
the world would be now, if there
hadn't been electricity. (I think this sentence should be in subjunctive mood. ^_^)
Before his
invention ("Discovery" is something found for the first time, while "invention" means something which has never been made before is created or designed. They are not synonyms. ^_^)...
...I want to know what made him
think in...for something
that was considered...
...I consider him
as one...would be a
breathtaking experience...
After that, every singe man on the planet could take advantage of having light all night long.
I think the meaning of this sentence is a little vague. You mean "take advantage of
having light all night long" or "take advantage of
the invention and have light all night long" ?
Wish my advice would help. :-)