Some researchers give an ideathat paying teachers according to their pupil's performance. I believe that student's academic skills strongly reflects how their teacher help them to promote their performance.
Some researchers give an idea
of paying teachers according to their pupil's performance. I believe that student's academic skills strongly
reflect how their
teachers help them to
improve their performance.
Grantly, paying teachers according to their students' academic performance can elicit disadvantages such as making light to non-academic subjects like Art and Music, but I strongly advocate that this policy will ultimately bring benefit them detriments by making teachers work hard and put more efforts to their students to be more incentives payed.
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First of all, in practical terms, promotion teachers makes them to put more efforts when their teach the students.
First of all, teachers who are promoted might put in more efforts while teaching their students.
Apparently, how much they will going to paid strongly influences their performance and how much pay their efforts to teach students to improve students' because of getting higher payments which will make them live better.
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I did not read whole essay! Kindly recheck and re-post the essay! There are loads of mistakes in tenses.