HI EVERYONE,
PLEASE HELP ME WITH SOME CORRECTION AND SUGGESTION. THANK YOU VERY MUCH
In order to love school and learning a child must be motivated. And motivation should come from teachers and from family. Even more, they should cooperate and work together for the good of the child , to encourage and motivate him in order him to have an increasing school progress.
First , a good motivation for a student in class, would be the very good teaching techniques . If the lesson is appealing and interesting for students, they will participate. A good teacher should motivate the class and make them curios about ongoing lesson. He has to sow in them an intellectual curiosity and also to wake up in them the desire to know and to acquire new and more knowledge. Another way of motivation could be praises. It stimulate and built the self-esteem, and teacher should use it daily for all students. In other words, he has to catch them doing something good, and to give them a positive feedback. A high self esteem plays a huge role in cognitive, affective and social development of students. Therefore , the class is the first place where they should be encouraged and motivated to learn . On the other hand, by using the power point program or other techniques to make the lessons clear and appealing, is another kind of motivation.
Secondly, a good management of class could be motivating , as well. If the teacher has the sense of humour ,and use it in dealing with discipline issues ,rather than irony or sarcasm, the students could be more willing to have a positive attitude for school. By respecting the students , in whatever situation , he can keep them positive, as well.
On the other hand , the children need attention, encouragement and motivation from their parents. Each parent should be aware of the huge role of motivation in his child's life. By being involved in school, by attending school's meetings or communicating with child's teacher, parents can motivate their child, and made him more determined to learn. For example, my daughter , who was in grade one ,liked to talk during the classes, and she was not very attentive. Her teacher called me, and I visited her as soon as I could. Her teacher was very nice, and we collaborated very well. When I got home, I talked to my daughter, I told her I visited her teacher and I explained her where she was wrong. I presented my expectations regarding her attitude in class and her work, and I assured myself that it was very clear for her. In a very short time I noticed a change in my daughter's behaviour ,and I saw her more interested in learning and more responsible. My intervention to her teacher motivated her and she became a hardworking and good student.
Motivation is the key of success for both children and adults. I think that a well motivated child will be a responsible and well motivated adult. That is why is our responsibility, as parents and teachers, in formative years, to model our children and influence them positively . If we offer them a good motivation to learn ,they will have a good and easy future.
First , a good motivation for a student in class, would be the very good teaching techniques .
does not need S at "technique"
general comment: you use so many "motive", "motivate", "motivation" in the essay. They should be occasionally replaced by words with similar meaning, such as encourage, impulse, advocate,...
In order to love school and learning a child must be motivated. And motivation should come from teachers and from family. Even more, they should cooperate and work together for the good of the child , to encourage and motivate him in order him to have an increasing school progress.
First , a good motivation for a student in class, would be the very good teaching techniques . If the lesson is appealing and interesting for students, they will participate. A good teacher should motivate the class and make them curios about ongoing lesson. He has to sow in them an intellectual curiosity and also to wake up in them the desire to know and to acquire new and more knowledge. Another way of motivation could be praises. It stimulate and built the self-esteem, and teacher should use it daily for all students. In other words, he has to catch them doing something good, and to give them a positive feedback. A high self esteem plays a huge role in cognitive, affective and social development of students. Therefore , the class is the first place where they should be encouraged and motivated to learn . On the other hand, by using the power point program or other techniques to make the lessons clear and appealing, is another kind of motivation.
Secondly, a good management of class could be motivating , as well. If the teacher has the sense of humour ,and use it in dealing with discipline issues ,rather than irony or sarcasm, the students could be more willing to have a positive attitude for school. By respecting the students , in whatever situation , he can keep them positive, as well.
On the other hand , the children need attention, encouragement and motivation from their parents. Each parent should be aware of the huge role of motivation in his child's life. By being involved in school, by attending school's meetings or communicating with child's teacher, parents can motivate their child, and made him more determined to learn. For example, my daughter , who was in grade one ,liked to talk during the classes, and she was not very attentive. Her teacher called me, and I visited her as soon as I could. Her teacher was very nice, and we collaborated very well. When I got home, I talked to my daughter, I told her I visited her teacher and I explained her where she was wrong. I presented my expectations regarding her attitude in class and her work, and I assured myself that it was very clear for her. In a very short time I noticed a change in my daughter's behaviour ,and I saw her more interested in learning and more responsible. My intervention to her teacher motivated her and she became a hardworking and good student.
Motivation is the key of success for both children and adults. I think that a well motivated child will be a responsible and well motivated adult. That is why is our responsibility, as parents and teachers, in formative years, to model our children and influence them positively . If we offer them a good motivation to learn ,they will have a good and easy future.
It stimulates and builts the self-esteem, and teacher should use it daily for all students.
In other words, he has to catch them doing something good, and to give them a positive feedback.
You are not allowed to perform this action.
It seems while you were posting your message, the thread was moved or closed and your data cannot be posted. Sorry!
Message:
... in order to inspire him to have school progress.---I just made a small change. Your way was okay.
First, a good source of motivation for a student in class is good teaching techniques.
**** Do not leave a space before the period. Only leave a space after the period:
Therefore , the class is the first place where they should be encouraged and motivated to learn .
Therefore , the class is the first place where they should be encouraged and motivated to learn.
...about the ongoing lesson.
**** Do not leave a space before the comma. Only leave a space after the comma:
Therefore, the class is the first place where they should be encouraged and motivated to learn.
Great sentence! ---> In a very short time I noticed a change in my daughter's behaviour ,and I saw her more interested in learning and more responsible.
Many of your sentences are very good. Keep practicing!!!
What action do you referred at , when you told me that I was not allowed to perform it. The fact that I posted again ? I have read your two first sentences hundred time, and I still don't understand them. what ``data ``means ? I 'm sorry I seem fool...
Oh, no!! I am sorry to have made you read it 100 times. Ha ha... I am falling out of my chair laughing.
Someone closed the thread when I was posting MY message to you, so I had to copy/paste my message after re-opening the thread. That part about the "action you are not allowed to perform" is not something I wrote to you. It is something I accidentally copy/pasted.
I'm sorry!!! :-)
So, you are not foolish. It was my mistake.
BTW data means "information."
