Salmon Life Cycle. It lives in upper-river which move slowly as an egg for 5 until 6 months.

The diagrams below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Large fish named salmon's life cycle process is presented in the diagrams. It lives in upper-river which move slowly as an egg for 5 until 6 months. Next, the egg transform to fry which has 3-8 cm size, and move to low-river which has fast flow. It lives there for about 4 years.

The fry evolve into smolt which has medium size about 12-15 cm. It migrates to open sea and spend its time about 5 years approximately there. In this place, the smolt witness the last transformation and it becomes adult salmon. It will move again to the upper-river when the breeding season is coming. The adult will place their egg near reeds and small stones in order to protect them from predators and river's stream. The adult has size about 70-76 cm. Although they breed in the river, they look for their pair in the sea. These process will occur in looping in salmon's life.

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