My first impression is that it's pretty short and concise. However, I have no idea about the word requirement for this task. Better go by the task requirements :)
Appearance is always often be the
firstconsidered in our way of seeingthing that makes the first impression about someone or something. But this
havehas to be the first
, not the last. We are not little to be disappointed by
outsiderexternal appearance instead of inner one.
We are not little to be disappointed by outsider appearance instead of inner one.
.... this is a very confusing sentence.... I don't understand what you try to mean by that :(