hai Jida. i am glad meet you here.
There are several reasons that the existence of tourism can have a negative impact on the environment.
in you topic sentence, you say that
the existence of tourism can have a negative impact , after that, you have mentioned
Firstly, many buildings including roads, hotels, or parking-place damage natural habitats of animals and plants and spoil the landscape. in my opinion, you should say a specific place in where
tourism could have some negative impacts. because your next supporting detail, you told about
maybe they can loss local traditions like fishing, farming, creating sculpture and many more.I think your sentences do not have coherence and cohesionIt is possible that local inhabitant are forced to work in the tourist industry. here, i suggest to find some specific ideas.
thank you. practice make perfect. so much.