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The percentage of people attending several public areas in Australia


Lita27 16 / 21 2  
Apr 3, 2016   #1
An illustration of the percentage of people attending several public areas in Australia is presented in the given bar chart. Overall, it can be seen that citizen who born in Australia and new migrants born in english-speaking coutries, with the exception of library, dominates the number of new migrants born in other countries visiting the places.

The popularity of cinema is the highest among native Australian and english-speaker new migrants, accounted for 70% and visrtually 65%, respectively. While for zoo, library and theather, the level of new migrants born in english-speaking countries always outnumber the Australian's rates. Interestingly, the disparity can be seen clearly in the zoo's visitor rates, in which new migrants from english-speaking countries attend this community place more frequent than other types of residents, the proportion is up to a half of people living in Australia.

Surprisingly though, library is predominantly attended by land-dwellers born outside english-speaking countries, it reachs in the vacinity of 55%. On the other hand, theather is the least attractive since the figures of people visiting this place shows the lowest level. They are less than a third and the number of new migrants non-english countries is at the base among the other sorts of citizens, only one in ten.



dina79 20 / 26 3  
Apr 3, 2016   #2
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The bar chart shows that the variety of destination place in Australia. Overall, it can be seen that the society considerable choose the favorite place while the one of type is the last choice as the journey of Australian people's

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