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The number of travellers visited New York City through three main US airports


Fauzi17 6 / 6 1  
Jan 21, 2016   #1
The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

A breakdown of the number of passengers visited New York City through three main airports over a six-year period during 1995 to 2000 and is measured by million. Overall, it is important to note that LaGuardia and Newark airport saw upwards trend, when LaGuardia airport was the most popular at the end rate. Next, there was a fluctuanted pattern in the number of passengers who travelled via John F. Kennedy airport.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, LaGuardia proportion stood at 35m in 1995, after that, there rose gradually for the next three years, at 46m. In 2000, the figure for passengers LaGuardia airport reached the peak point at 68m travellers. In Newark airport, it began at the lowest point of 16m passengers in the first year. Subsequently, the trend increased significantly to 42m in 1998. In the last two years it remained stable at 42m travellers.

Turning to the number of travellers at John F. Kennedy airport started at 26m in 1995, while increased rapidly to reach the highest point of 47m in 1997. In 1999, the figure for passengers was a minimal decrease to 32m. At the last period, there was a slight growth to 44m .



yus72 6 / 6 1  
Jan 21, 2016   #2
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vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Jan 21, 2016   #3
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