IELTS 1 - Money Spent on Books - France and Austria spent the most

The line graph shows the change in the amount of money spent on books in some countries from 1995 to 2005 and is measured in millions of US dollars. Overall, it can be seen that, France and Austria show the upward trend along period, but Germany and Italy experience a fluctuation over 11 years.

To begin, France and Austria spent most money on books. They began at a fairly similar level during 3 years. Then, in France, 1999 saw a gradual increase to around 10, but Austria witnessed a levelling off at 40 in that year until 2001. Afterwards, Money spent on book in France rise slightly for the remainder of the period, while Austria increase dramatically from 2001 to 2005.

Turning to other countries, released funds on books in Germany saw small growth during the period 1995 to 1999, but then fell steadily over the next 5 years. Next, there was a sudden rise from 2003 to 2005. Another country, Italy witnessed a slow increase during 2 years, but then declined slowly approximately 50 between 1997 and 1999. Finally, there was increased steadily to around 65 at the end of period.

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