My mom is everything. She's smart, she's caring but most she is a courageous mother to me. That why she is my hero. Since I was born my parents had lived in peru Peru. My mother had always thought I needed a better education.
My mom is everything. She's smart. She's caring. But most of all, she is courageous, which is why she is my hero. Since I was born my parents had lived in Peru. My mother had always thought I needed a better education.
This is how I think it should be stated :)
Also, Susan can you please look at my essay? I feel ignored and others have changed a few words on my essay. However, I'm not getting feedback on content, or flow, etc.