I agree with Dumi, be careful with the prompt..if you don't pay attention with the prompt, it could be out of topic..
When you say small families, it means that you are taking about families of small size. However, your topic is not about the size of the family, but about the family relationships. I think you have gone out of track. Even your topic is out of topic
IT IS GENERALLY ACCEPTED THAT FAMILIES ARE NOT AS CLOSE AS THEY USED TO BE.
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it's your topic, you have to explain about family relationship maybe you can make comparison between the previous family relationship with todayFor example, all family members can decide to meet on skype once in a week.
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double verbIn case of business family, person needs not to migrate anywhere
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person do not need migrate anywhereIn addition, government can develop job opportunities in all cities
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But people within family are not like minded and it creates traction within the family.
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what this sentece means? can you rewrite this sentence?