Jobs for teenagersis
/are one of the most discussed topics
in our society. s
/Some agree that teenagers should work, earn their own money and do study while others think that they should not work rather they they should only concentrate in thier studies. But I highlyapperciate
/appreciate the point that teenagers should work and earn their own expence
When a teenager sponser
/sponsor himself for his own studies he knows the value of money and become more foccused
/focused towards his studies.
Where as other aspect of working teenager which our society fears that they will be distracted by money and will loose focuss
/focus in their studies.
If we guide our teenagers in every step of their life , motivate them and make them understand clearly every aspect of life,
then I think our teenagers will make us proud in
/of all their endeaveours
Therefore, I strongly vote that all teenager should work and make their individual identity very early in life and make their parents feel proud for
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