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The most important characteristic to be successful in life and best way to tackle with difficulties


summer_breeze3 1 / 1  
Jul 9, 2010   #1
In my opinion the most important characteristic that a person should have to be successful in life is a good sense of humor. One might be intelligent, honest and kind but when all goes wrong the best way to tackle with difficulties is approaching to them optimistically.

To begin with, the whole existing in the world is a rivalry where really often you are on the weaker side. You can lose your job after years of trying to achieve professional acknowledgement, or you can look as a straggler after failing at an exam. The important thing is never to give up and not to take everything personal. People who manage to overcome the "being down in the dumps" feeling are the ones who succeed.

Moreover, who does not admire those who make others laughing out loud? If you can amuse your friends, they will always be delighted to spend their time with you which is a personal achievement. Secondly, communication with others will be a lot more fluent. You become more attractive to colleagues, friends and acquaintances. Not mentioning that one of the key moments in a love relationship is making your partner laughing.

Critics of my position may say that this kind of people cannot approach adequately to a serious situation or crisis and do not have a realistic image of life. But I think that those who claim this should distinguish acting carelessly between acting calmly. Worrying too much will only cause you a headache and you will struggle more until finding the best solution.

To sum up, I strongly believe that the sense of humor is the most important characteristic one should have in order to be successful. In other words, "When life gives you lemons, twist some and peel into a martini.".
Azeri 10 / 137  
Jul 9, 2010   #2
Hi.
here are my comments:

To begin with, the whole exisence in the world is a rivalry where really often you are on the weaker side.

People who manage to overcome the "being down in the dumps" feeling are the ones who succeed.
People overcoming "being down in the dumps" feeling succeed. - this is just a suggestion though, since your version is also correct.

Secondly, communication with others will be a lot more fluent, because one becomes more attractive to colleagues, friends and acquaintances. - again it is a suggestion.

Critics of my position may say that this kind of people - what kind of people? - cannot approach adequately to a serious situation or crisis and do not have a realistic image of life. - why?

Worrying too much will only cause you a headache and you will struggle more until finding the best solution. - It can be inferred from the sentence that you are against finding the best solution. Why? Is it bad?

in my opinion you deviate from the topic of the essay in your theses statement and first paragraph. You discuss more the necessity to stay optimistic and not to give up rather than the importance of sense of humor.
Lynn Truong 3 / 4  
Jul 10, 2010   #3
Hi,
here is my adjustment.

or you can look as a straggler after failing at an exam : you can look like
not to take everything personal: do not

Secondly: i didnot see your firstly

That's all for me. I aslo learn alot from your excellent ideas


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