Several humans believe that a great and amazing structures are necessary for every town. Whereas other argue that it is more(than what?) important to spend more money for building an educational facilities and health facilities. This essay will discuss both points of view. ButOn the other hand, in my opinion, it is more useful to spend money for improving schools and hospitals.
do not use transition word "BUT" in the beginning of a sentence in more formal writing.However, I do not argue that these argument is more useful than improving schools and hospitals. The first reason is that it will be more beneficial, because if we build or improve schools, it will increase the quality of education and also
ifwhen we fix the health facilities, it can make inhabitant more healthier. Then, improving school and hospitals can show that the country or the city resposible to its population and
itstheir future. Because a good education will bring a good human resource which will develop the city. Therefore,
again, building an educational and health facilities are better than impressive construction.
keep writing Ani !