I strongly believe that controlling population through taxes is not a right way where other alternatives are available. In this essay I will explain my views why I do not agree with the concept of introducing extra taxes to control the population .
India and China have introduced some strict rules and regulations
At this stand point, I believe that increasing awareness by a remarkable ways of campaigning can help civilians to understand the drawbacksseriousness of overpopulation hence alleviate the uncontrolled growth of people . As for example, government could conduct some programs via NGO, television, radio, internet and so on which would unmask the negative effects of overpopulation such as shortage of food, unemployment, economic instability and so forth.
I think you need not to explain waht kind of campaigns they are, for this will make your readers bored.
introducing extra taxes to control the population will help people to rethink conceiving a baby.
Don't have too many unnecessary words
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by the way I think your train of thought is clear