Students, particularly the the young ones, are worse affected by enormous quantity of test during school time.
.... very true.... I too hate exams :D
No sooner do children start attending primary schools than they have to struggle against the enemy named tests.
... this sentence needs improvement in terms of clarity;
No sooner the children begin elementary school, they are forced to battle against a great enemy called "tests" . .... hey, this is a bit too much :D
Crammed with many a subject and different types of examination, it is not overstated that studying turns out to be a burden for kids to bear that may result in kids' depressdepressed kidsand health deterioration
... avoid making your sentence too complicated.
All in all, important role of tests and examinations is undeniable in education systems
Overall, nobody can deny that tests and examinations play a very important role for the betterment of any education system.