TOEFL - For me eating at home is necessity and eating out is luxury

For me eating at home is necessity and eating out is luxury. The main reason behind it is health. Eating right is essential part of good health. Homemade food is more healthy than outside food. The other thing that matters here is expense. Eating out means more expense. No one can afford to eat in a fancy restaurant everyday.

Although sometimes it is good for me to eat out as in a restaurant one can get different cuisine and different kinds of food. It can refresh jaded taste. And also sometimes eating out gives my mother a much needed break. Being a student whose college starts from nine in the morning sometimes it is necessary for me to eat out.

Everything aside nothing tastes better than homemade food as it is made with care and love. The quality of homemade food is always better. As vegetables and the ingredients used in a restaurant may not be fresh. The environment where the food is made may be unhygienic.

These are the reasons why I prefer to eat at home. But once a month I eat out as it brings the family together and also refreshes our jaded taste.

For me eating at home is necessary and eating out is luxury. The main reason behind it is health. Eating right is the essential part of maintaining good health. Homemade food is more healthy than outside food. The other thing that matters here is expense. Eating outside means more expenses . No one can afford to eat in a fancy restaurant every day .

Although sometimes it is good for me to eat out as in a restaurant one can get different cuisine and different kinds of food.It can refresh jaded taste. And also sometimes eating gives my mother a much needed break.Being a student whose college starts from nine in the morning sometimes it is necessary for me to eat out.

Everything aside nothing tastes better than homemade food as it is made with care and love. The quality of homemade food is always better, as vegetables and the ingredients used in a restaurant may not be fresh. The environment where the food is made may be unhygienic.

These are the reasons why I prefer to eat at home. But once a month I eat out as it brings the family together and also refreshes our jaded taste

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