Regarding this,Therefore some people prefer to dine out , while others like eating at home.
Personally, I think that eating at home is more beneficial for our family.
Personally, from the family perspective, I think eating at home brings many benefits.eating at home can eat more healthy food as when we make food at home,
....this is grammatically incorrect.
.... eating at home enables people to eat fresh, clean and healthy food.However, some restaurants have useduse artificial flavors in their food for taste.
... this happens now , so keep it in present tense.
You need to pay attention to grammar. Your essay structure is good :)