With no doubt, Experience is the best teacher

With no doubt, experience is the best teacher which teaches individuals how to treat or make a decision in the future. There is certain inevitability that elder people have more experience than young people and they can make a better decision when encounter difficulties.

A large number of people are united in one belief that having experience helps them to handle their problems more effectively. For example, scientists who investigate natural phenomena are convinced that they can make a better conclusion when they get experience during their research and are able to cope with obstacles. Experience gives us valuable lessons which are gained by making mistakes. " Experience is a taskmaster teacher since it first examines individuals then teaches them," psychologists say.

On top of getting experience, individuals should make a real effort to learn about their faults and avoid from repeating them. It is with regret seen that some people repeat their mistakes several times and do not learn from them. On the other hand, we ought not to always get experience from our errors. Instead of that, we could learn some lessons from other individuals' adventures. For example, when some individuals come across problems in their careers and after that find a solution for it we can use their experience in favor of ourselves and avoid repeat same mistake in our job.

To sum up, I argue that experience is the best teacher. With the help of experience we are able to male logical decision so as to make progress. Having experience is a blessing. However, without experience we confront problems in our lives.

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I don't see the argument here. Try this, In conclusion, I strongly believe that experience is our best teacher.

Personally, I think that the structure of the essay is not quite clear! the paragraphs are not balanced and I don't see a clear thesis statement.

You can try writing an introduction, at the end of it you can write the thesis statement. (experience is the best teacher)

then you will need two supporting ideas at least to support your thesis.. and then develop those ideas in two different paragraphs... then the conclusion.

I think your ideas are right but using the previous structure I think the essay would be better

There is nothing wrong with this sentence in terms of grammar or vocabulary. However, it is good that you start with introducing the topic. Since this is an agrgumentive essay you need to show the other side of the argument also. Once you introduce the topic, you can state your opinion as you did above.


I doubt whether this is a good example... Scientists have gained lots of theoratical knowledge before getting on to research. Without that they would not be able to carry out research. However, you can use a different example such as a car mechanic... He's a guy who works with more " know how" than book lessons. Always pick more specific and relevant examples to support your reasons.