In this respect, t
here are numerous reasons why individuals who migrate to big cities bring about an
increase in crime rates such as lack of education and changes in values.
education has become an
indispensible part of people' lives
There are multiple
connections between education and crime rates.
studies done on this issue indicate that people who are involved in illegitemate ways are generally composed of uneducated individuals. - what sources did you get this from?
Moreover, they may be deprived of receiving a good education
Because of this, they are obligated to resort to illegal ways in order to afford their expences. - this is a huge statement. If this were true then a lot more people would be out there committing crimes. (source)
It plays a leading role in increasing crime rates in big cities.- you can take out this sentence
When it comes to changes in values, it is a
undeniable fact that almost all social and cultural
and social developments set the stage for such changes in the worldConsequently
, individuals begin to turn a blind eye these values because of their economical interests.
As far as I am concerned,
should show greater
determination and take an
initiative to handle these pressing
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