Thanks zhangqin
I thank you, too, Zhang, for helping to make EF an excellent forum.
...education was still a far-fetched idea for many people, nowadays anybody can receive education. However, some people ...
...where students have chance to gain experience before entering real society.
You do not have many errors!
This is not an error, just my idea to improve clarity: Finally, it is not certain that a student who does well in high school will do well in higher education.
It requires students to have flexible studying methods.
Students need to spend much time on self-study, while teachers just play a small role.
Therefore,
not struggling students can adapt to new studying environment. And, there is no promise that every good high school student going to a college will graduate successfully. Nam, my close friend, is a good example. He was ...
Subsequently, he had to drop out. Thus, in this case, higher ...
Very good job. You write beautifully in English, with only small mistakes, and despite your mistakes your intelligence is obvious.
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