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Toefl essay - CELEBRITY OR ATHLETE - WHOM DO YOU WANT TO MEET AND WHY?


sandipsinh 37 / 90 3  
Mar 26, 2014   #1
IF YOU COULD MEET A FAMOUs PERSON ENTERTAINER OR ATTLETE, WHO WOULD THAT BE AND WHY? USE SPECIFIC REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR CHOICE.

Today meeting and personally seeing celebrities or athlete has become a matter of prestige. If anybody get to meet his favorite entertainer, indeed he would feel as if he is on cloud nine. Likewise them, I would feel great ecstasy in case I get to meet Mr. Amitabh Bachan. He is prominent Bollywood star and quit cherished person of the entertainment industry.

Firstly, I have fallowed his "Kaun banega crorepati" show, it's an Indian daily show. On the basis of his performance and interaction with participant, I tend to adore his personality and his humble behavior. However, to assure whether his behavior is genuine or is it only because he is paid for presenting himself that way for the show. I want to meet him and spend a day with him to observe his attitude and authentic behavior with other people. I can make my assessment by comparing his attitude by seeing his ways of treating his helpers at home or at his work and how his behavior is with aristocrat people of his industry.

Secondly, I believe he would be an appropriate person to ask certain suggestion about tackling fear, praise, failures and victories. In my understanding stars that has infinite number of people fallowing them, live with lot of strain to maintain their expectation abreast performing every other regular obligations. Few year back he was bankrupted and his stardom faded, he went through most devastating phrase of his life. But this audacious men pulled himself together and again shined on Indian entertainment industry. He said that he made few good friends and lost countable and realized what is the value of single rupee? Since then he is trying to live life of common men than of star.

Mr. Bachan has experienced life of 80's as well as 20's, I hope that my meeting with him will help me to learn facts about every junction of life, how to resolve disastrous problem of life and provide me tips for rising back after diminishing.
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Mar 26, 2014   #2
If anybody get to meet his favorite entertainer, indeed he or she would feel as if he is on cloud nine. Likewise them , I would feel such great ecstasy in case if I get to meet Mr. Amitabh Bachan. He is the most prominent Bollywood star and quite cherished person of the entertainment industry.

Impressive intro :)
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Mar 27, 2014   #3
Today meeting and personally seeing celebrities or athlete has become a matter of prestige

This is not valid only for today, but it's an all time case :D

Today meeting and personally seeingMeeting a celebritycelebrities or an athlete has becomeis a matter of prestige for many people.

Begin your body para with the reason to justify your opinion (in this case, why you like Big B ). So start like this;
First, I am such an admirer of his personality.
Now tell the examples as to why you are so :)


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