Hello, I'm Tor from Thailand. I am a new member here and this is my first essay in IELTS exam preparation.
.... You are very welcome :)
In the past when communication was not as convenient as present, boarding schools was probably one and only option for certain families, especially those who lived in the rural areas, to endow their children with education. But when transportation has become better, trend has been changed toward day school. Yet in some countries, thing does not follow the same direction as boarding schools once again turn back to popularity.
Well.... it seems you are taking the essay a little bit away from your topic.... For this task, for you need to introduce your topic to the reader. What is your topic?
In some countries boarding schools are getting more popular. Is it a positive or negative development? What are the reasons behind it?
... This does not talk about the past and also it is even more popular now due to the very reason you point out. Actually, improved transportation has enabled students to go out of their state or country and study and due to the distance, they need a boarding.
So, you should introduce it without diverting its direction;
With heavy influence of globalization, students today have more options for choosing a college for their studies. In many cases, students opt to study in colleges outside their home state or country. For this reason, most of the schools nowadays provide boarding facilities for the students who come from far away places. However, some people believe this as a negative trend while others view it as positive. In my opinion, I think this trend has more disadvantages than advantages.