a well written report, in my opinion, with only a few minor problems.
the percentage of coca-cola's global scale in 2000,
I think you'd better also say where: the percentages of coca-cola's global scale in different parts of the world in 2000
American continent
the American continent
30% of total coca-cola sale
30% of coca-cola's sales
The figure for Asia was relatively better than that ,at 16.4%.
bigger may be more appropriate than better here
you failed to predict the total sale which is 7.1bn
the share price for coca-cola stood about 35$
stood at about
with around 80$,though it slumped below 50$ in 2000
at around 80$, though it slumped to below 50$