It is true that more and more work is done by machines
today ... you need to specify the time!
Although this may have some
drawbacksnegative outcomes , I believe that the benefits
it offers are greater than the disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are several disadvantages of doing work by machines.
If you hold the opposite opinion, then use both your body paras to justify your opinion. There is no point in talking about the other side as this is a persuasive essay.