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Academic or non academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Gagandeep 1 / -  
Oct 10, 2012   #1
QUESTIONS
With the pressures on today's young people to succeed academically, some people
believe that non-academic subjects at school (e.g physical education and cookery)
should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on
academic subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

ANS---
undoubtedly non academic subject is also necessary for student although they have massive burden regarding their academic subject.This essay will go along with that non academic study such as physical and cookery should not be remove from school.

From my personal observation I strongly feel that too much pressures of academic subject can make student book worm and it could be stop their growth.Obviously student should pay proper heed towards their academic study but there should be part time for their personal entertainment.The subjects like cookery and physical education are entertaining subjects it relaxes students mind and gives them positive energy.Moreover non academic subjects also playing vital role in their life,it gives them strength to think something more except study.

Whereas some people believe that non academic subjects are wasting of time because they suppose that student have precious time to do study they should concentrate on study only instead to look on extra subjects for instance physical education etc.However,there is sheer numbers of students who work hard on academic subjects and they have not time to think about other non academic subjects but usually we can see, that kind of students though they have too much knowledge but they could not express it because of shyness, lack of confidence and the other reason is they spend their huge amount of time only on books study.In addition,They did not meet people,they have not time for non academic purpose so it reduce their will power to speak in front of other people.In this result their lot of knowledge is worthless.

It is noticeable,it should not be right to say that physical education and cookery type of subjects hindrance in the way of success,because it is not always necessary that student who concentrate on academic study they are better to get their goal in life.Nowadays we can see that there are many celebrities who are sports man,famous chef etc.People like to follow them and interested in their autographs.Furthermore, they achieved their aim because they are all rounder not a book worm who only focus on academic study.

In conclusion,non academic subjects can make students more energetic towards study and it also can give relaxations on mind and thereafter they can do their study very well after spending some time on physical activities.
OVODiana 2 / 6  
Nov 1, 2012   #2
I agree. I know a lot of people who don't have a college degree who have decent jobs and make good money. You're essay is interesting.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Nov 1, 2012   #3
uU ndoubtedly non academic subjects (better keep it plural since there are many non academic subjects) are is also necessary for the student's development that help them learn many social skills(tell the reader why non academic subjects are necessary) although they have massive burden regarding theirthey already struggle to cope with their academic subjects alone .This essay will go along with thatIn my view,(it's better if you express your opinion direct) non academic studyies such as physical and cookery should not be removed from schoolstudent curriculum .

WhereassS ome people believe that non academic subjects are wastingwaste of time because they supposethink that student's prime objective is tohave precious time to do studystudies and engaging inthey should concentrate on study only instead to look onextrasubjectscurricular activities such asfor instance physical education, cookery etc. may disturb the stuendt's academic pursuit

Try to improve the clarity of your sentences that convey your idea clearly to the reader. Shorter sentences may help you in this regard. : )
rezwan3 7 / 19 4  
Nov 1, 2012   #4
I admire your position. However, if you use shorter sentences, your main idea will undoubtedly stand out


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