hanging out too much with friends so they cannot manage time for studying
it is me :)
You write well. I like this essay.
my essay can be qualified for IELTS with band score 6.5
Ok. We talk about this exam.
Were I you, perhaps I'd start analyzing this prompt in order to earn a good score for Task response, like this:Fact: The idea of going overseas for univ study is an exciting prospect for many people.
Opinions: but while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay at home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a diffferent cultures.
Task: To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement
A closer look at the task: To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement...
For me, if you are offered such task, then you are asked to take a position, which is neither in total agreement nor total disagreement, but somewhere in between. Then, you should explain why.
If you peruse the IELTS band descriptors for "Task Responses" ielts.org/PDF/UOBDs_WritingT2.pdf then you'll see this:
"addresses the task only partially", which means the question is not fully answered. Hence, you'd better spend lil time to analyze the question, so you could avoid giving a partial answer for the task.
Hope this help you :D