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"Chritmas is a wonderful time of the year. Every year my mom has a Christmas dinner in the evening. The house is always beatiful when the holiday approaches. I feel excited. It makes me feel happy when we are gathered around, and the food; that is just the best part. The Christmas tree is beautiful as the one downtown. Its fresh grassy colors make everyone stop and stare at its beauty. The lights are reflected all around the walls, over the windows, on the trees; it makes the house as bright as the stars.
The table of my place is so gorgeous. My table cloth is a creamy vanilla color with a bright Christmas tree in the middle, and the swirly gold designs are beautiful. My mom always makes good, delicious foods with my aunt's help. There is mashed potatos, salad, gravy, beans, and the most important, roasted brown chicken. For dessert we have either apple, pumpkin, or cherry pie with whipped cream on top. Some times there is cake. By this time the house smells so good. These foods smell so good, but too bad I have to wait until they are done with the whole preparation.
The guests start arriving. I can see the women are dressed up in their lovely pretty dresses all looking fabulous, the men are dressed in tuxedos and are looking good too. I hear people talking and having a good time. I also play music like "Let it Snow" or some kind of Christmas song to get the entertainment going. By then everyone is gathered around the table. First thing we do is pray, then my dad carves the tasty looking chicken. After that everybody digs in. Everybody seems to be enjoying everything. Christmas at my place is a very cozy, fun place to me."
Great job; I like the new improvements! Keep up the good work!