This is due Monday Sept. 27
Hey Scott, I'm sorry I did not get to help sooner!
I would suggest not using the 2nd person singular, i.e. you, because it is coming across as slightly awkward
I guess I agree. Also, some people find it to be... what is the word... preachy or presumptuous or something.
Also, it creates a problem here:
Did you catch that key phrase "you move on."-- need a question mark, but it will be awkward.
"our greatest glory is not in never failing, but in rising up every time we fail."--- oh, good one! That reminds me of the Japanese expression: (I don't know the correct way to write the words) Na na korobi yaoki jinsei wa korei kara da.
You did a good job writing about the quote, but I think you need more specific examples.
I hope you got a good grade! :-)