For example, I could survive my father from a business scandal and I helped one of my friends to solve his deep problems with his family
For example, I helped my father survive from a business scandal and assisted one of my friends to solve his deep emotional issues with his family.For example, in our school trips I was the unique leader of student group. I was also the most important candidate in the school council. Meanwhile, I am a successful manager in my workplace.
... this example is not very relevant to your reason. give a better reason,
Overall, this is good writing, You follow the right structure too :)