Many parents in the world always are thinking about future their children.
All parents in this world are thinking about their children's future.
Habitually, they gift prize for them especially for improving children develop
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First of all, computer has many benefits for children
I think, this statement is not appropriated to be put in your first body, because you explain the benefit of computer only in this paragprah
In summary, I think that children should be able to use operating computer because this knowledge that it will help them for increasing their skill forward the future.
Has it answered the case in the introductory?