develop skills for it.
...develop skills for using computers and their applications.This early and over exposure to computers has already caused a lot of harm and would cause further damage if not checked in time
.... very good point.
This early and over exposure to computers have already caused lots of harm to children and my further damage if this issue is not addressed promptly.I have the following reasons to believe so.
... I think you need not to say this. The body paras well describe your reasons. :)
Spending some time on computer games is okayfine, however continuously playing for long hours would cause fatigue, irritability, loss of concentration etc.
Good essay... you have very good ideas, vocabulary and sentence structures :)
Good luck!