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TV & Movies have negative effects on children.



susananleyThreads: 1
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Oct 20, 2013, 02:57am   #1
Do you agree or disagree with the following this statement? Television and movies have negative effects on children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Watching television is the most common things that people do during their leisure time. In my opinion, I disagree with children watching television and movies effect their mind badly.

First of all, watching television and movies is one of the ways that children can increase and develop children's brain. For example, children could learn English naturally by watching cartoon and kid shows in English. And also, watching reality shows llike musics, movies, dancing could increase their creation mind about the art. In addition, Channels like Discovery or National Geographic, give them information about wild life.

Another reason is watching television and movies is the ways they can share their opinion about the world to their family members. And also, it is one of the ways to gather people in family after long day work. In this busy life, television and movies could be the easiest way to entertain and relax.

Besides those benefit of watching televison and movies in children, there are a few disadvantages. Watching too much television have bad effects on eyesight. For example, there are many young children having a bad eyesight because they are watching television all days. In addition, television and movies content too much adult and violence scenes will might be effects to their mind. Moreover, more and more children nowadays are addicted to watch instead they plays outsides with their friends.

In conclusion, watching television and movies have many benefit to develop children creation and languages. But also, if parents let them watching too much, children will have bad effects in their mind.



hikarulapThreads: 1
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Oct 20, 2013, 05:45am   #2
Watching television is the most common things that people do during their leisure time. In my opinion, I disagree with children watching television and movies effect their mind badly.

First of all, watching television and movies is one of the ways that children can increase and develop children's brain. For example, children could learn English naturally by watching cartoon and kid shows in English. And also, watching reality shows llikelike musics, movies, dancing could increase their creation's mind about the art. In addition, Channels like Discovery or National Geographic, give them information about wildlife.

Another reason is watching televisions and movies is the ways they can share their opinion about the world towith their family members. And also, it is one of the ways to gather people in family after a long day work. In this busy life, television and movies could be the easiest way to entertain and relax.

Besides thosethese benefits of watching television and movies in children, there are a few disadvantages. Watching too much television havehas bad effects on eyesight. For example, there are many young children having a bad eyesight because they are watching television all daysday. In addition, television and movies content too much adult and violence scenes will might be effects tothe effects of their mind. Moreover, more and more children nowadays are addicted to watchwatching instead they plays outsides with their friends.

In conclusion, watching television and movies have many benefit to develop children's creation and languages. But also, if parents let them watching watch too much, children will have bad effects in on their mind.


dumiThreads: 1
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Oct 20, 2013, 10:05am   #3
susananley:
Watching television is the most common things that people do during their leisure time. In my opinion, I disagree with children watching television and movies effect their mind badly.

Follow this structure for your introduction;
Have these three parts in your introduction;
1. Hook - An interesting statement to catch the reader's attention
2. Background - Give the context to the reader
2.1. Definition of the question
2.2. Importance of the question (why it is important to discuss this argument)
3. Thesis statement - Express your view


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Oct 20, 2013, 10:32am   #4
susananley:
Another reason is watching television and movies is the ways they can share their opinion about the world to their family members. And also, it is one of the ways to gather people in family after long day work. In this busy life, television and movies could be the easiest way to entertain and relax.

Where is the example? Make sure you provide a specific example to each reason you bring up to justify your position on the argument.
susananley:
Besides those benefit of watching televison and movies in children, there are a few disadvantages. Watching too much television have bad effects on eyesight. For example, there are many young children having a bad eyesight because they are watching television all days.
............ here you go :) ....... this is the right way. Give your reason and support it with a specific example :)




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