It has been widely noted that the use of nuclear technology has spread today.This technology bring itself a lot
of disasters.However its benefits are more than its threats. (<-------intro is tooo short, without a theme sentence)
To begin with, nuclear power is used to produce electricity.From nuclear power, poisonous gases like carbon
does (is) not produse (produced) during electricity production.Futhermore, wastage due to produse (produce) power does not effect anyone in its surrounding (<-----this sentence isnt making any meaningful sense, rephrase it).As a consequece, nuclear power station generate electricity without pollution.
Apart from it, with the help of this technolgy, researchers could find the solution of dangerous disease called
cancer and other major problems (we have always read that nuclear radiation cause diseases like cancer, do tell from where u got the info that it is being used to cure it).From the negative aspect, atom bombs are also the invention of this which
are used in wars(rephrase this sentence too).In these days, bombs are making so dangerous that they can
destrust (distrust) the large part of the country.Plus, the biggest problem is the dangerous rays which come from this are very harmful to the life of humans.
To sum up, it depends upon the individual 's thinking that from which point he or she takes it.From positive aspect,
is is boon and from negative point , it is curse for us. (<---very ordinary conclusion...make it impressive)
---I would say that the whole essay is pretty ordinary i think....u need to work a little on ur grammar-spellings n also write a five para essay for IELTS exam.
.Please check my essay and give required band scores for my essay.If you seem that my essay is totally wrong , so then please rewrite it.
even "god helps those who helps themselves" n v all on this essay forum r just humans..... kindly feel free to get as many advices n suggestions u wish n re-write ur essay urself..... EF certainly doesnt encourage writing for others...
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