The 21st century ( either Nowadays or 21st century - use only one) made
huge steps in developing technologies and reached many goals that made our life better. Language is the most important
to medium of
The first and second sentences are disconnected to each other. What technological developments have to do with language learning , ------ if possible,[establish that link to make both sentences interconnected.
It is not enough to be able to speak [/s] One language is not enough to get
through connected with the outside world. I am strongly put up agree with the idea that children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. In the following paragraph I will make a list of elaborate or state or describe some reasons to show my point of view.. ( this sentence is repeated .. delete it or say it differently)
First of all, If one wants to see
outcome soon, one must start
sooner at early age
. Children like "a new paper" ( you tried to use analogy here. This is very GOOD. ..but it is not clear enough).
and it is easy to learn a new language. We should teach them when they were a little child. ( my suggestion is; [font#FF0000] Children are like "clay to potters," Teaching at early age can mould them into multilingual communicator.
In the modern life, we have This skill helps
to deal with customers, cultural
other countries, read academic document
s or even
make friends all around the world.
all of them is the reason That is
at least a bilingual
So, the early children
learn a new language
is better than the one learns later.
You should include some more reasons. You pointed out children's learning capacity is better in first reason. and your second reason also carry almost the same meaning as the first. Think about more "Reasons"... why on early age or why not inj school etc..
# children at school learn with specialised materials using structured method . This helps to grasp new language easily without much effort.
# speaking new words is fun among peers. Sharing secrets among close friends in unknown language. Helping learn faster with fun.
# high school or college level students have to concentrate in other more important areas of study. So they do not get enough time to concentrate in learning new language.