It is an inevitable topic that we will face with an aging society in the future. How to evaluate impact of an aging society? Different people have different answer.
There is no denying that,
on the one hand, capital and labor market will profit from the elders when they are still working for their department and companies. To begin with, as the elders work continuously, it will trigger the labor cost to decrease rapidly. Specifically, the elders, who are sophisticated administrators or technicians and need no more training, can help their employer save an enormous amount of money. Obviously, employer will have to afford huge finance to train young employees to be suitable for their job. Besides, the elders can manage their work more efficiently and smoothly. Usually, the elders possess more affluent experience of work than the young Meanwhile and their enthusiasm in working is as high as the young. Therefore, the elders in workplaces will be a huge fortune.(Therefore, elders who are still working will be an asset to the companies and the workplaces.)
On the other hand, negative concerns about aging society have also been gradually emerging. Firstly, aging population bring many serious burdens on their family. More precisely, in the future a family will be forced to breed up four elders and one child,
for more and more a couple only have a child and the elder increase as well. (This part should be rewritten.) Secondly, aging population will present severe pressure on society, such as public healthcare and welfare. As we know, when the elders are deprived of work and ill, it will be mammoth financial burden to the whole society. However, we have enough labor to build more wealth to resolve the problem, for the elders would be more lager than the young(This part should be rewritten because it is incomprehensible.. Hence, how can we [font#FF0000imagine[/font] this picture?
To sum up, I really think the negative effects overbalance the positive effects to aging population. So, our government and society must implement proper strategies to face the problems in the future. For example, we should build more social security and welfare system for the elders, so as to tackle these problems.
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