Dear, pahan. You know, I am in studying structure. I have an asked about this
to bringing
In my understanding to infinitive, to should be face v1. Would you kindly give me explanation about my confusing ?
(don't drag on the same idea for too long - that gets the reader bored)
HI, Arun. Thank you for correct me very deep, I am very glad this is what I am expected
2nd and 3rd paragraphs where you were discussing about " Causes of over-population " instead of " Problems caused by over-population"
Yap, i get what you mean. When I mention this
It can be caused by
I didn't mention the prompt
Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes
I should aware more before answering :D
I dont think Furthermore is an appropriate linking word to start discussing about solutions to control over population which is a contrary discussion against the problems caused by over-population.
. May I said that you suggest me to use "however" or "in contrary" to show the contrast in this sentence ?
Overall, I say thank you. You help me very much. Do not worry I don't feel discouraged. Your correction make realize me to peruse. I hope you are willing to correct my next writings. :DD