IELTS Task I : Flowchart process of academic writing

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The flowchart below shows the process involved in writing formal academic essay for particular university course.

Describe the stages of the process in a reporter a university lecturer.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The flowchart below reveals the stages which should be complete in writing academic essay in a particular university course.

Generally, there are six stages should be complete to make an academic essay consecutively.

The first stage is private tutorial. This stage directs the student to take discussion about the task topic with the tutor. After that, obtaining resources such as books and articles should be done, too. The second stage involves conducting a research. Taking note in the library, giving questionnaire, conducting interview, and doing survey are the part of this stage. Next, making an essay draft is the third stage. It is necessary to plan your essay with organize the content and produce the brief outline; and also first checking for writing style and formal language usage is needed, too.

However, discussing the first draft problems and asking for further ideas suggestion are occurred in the fourth stage. Then, student should be revised the draft with read resource material again and adding the suggestion in the previous stage; also checking for quotations is required. Now, five stages have been complete. The final draft checking should be stand strictly before student submitted the final draft. It includes rewrite the final draft with carefully check the words spelling; compiled with bibliography and add title page are necessitate, consider to submit the essay before the deadline completion.

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Hey, excellent intro and overview. You are improving a lot with this task :)

The second stage involves conductingdoinga research on the topic.
I must say you have improved hell of a lot with this task. This is really cool :)

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Thank you for your appreciation, Pahan. While I read this, it is like drink two glasses guava juice after sunbathing. cheers :D

Overall, writing a formal essay requires six stages to be fulfilled before submitting the final version.


have a discussion


Learners could take advantage of materials in the library or do fieldwork like giving questionnaires and conducing surveys at this stage.


The result of the first two stages is the first draft of the essay, for which students need organize the content and produce a brief outline in advance.


However is not the appropriate preposition here. You could use "Next" or "Following that" instead.


Students should revise the draft by reading the resource material again prior to adding suggestion and checking quotations to form the second draft.


should be carried out strictly


rewriting the final draft


careful checking


Students have to submit the essay


I agree with Pahan :)

Thank you, Tuan. You correct the grammar and syntax wholly.
I found in the dictionary, and i consider


conducting is preferable.
please keep comment in my next. thank you