'Strictly executed measures' - essay about traffic problems and solutions

Hope someone 'll help me to correct mistakes !
Traffic problem has become a worldwide issue in recent years. Many countries, including Vietnam, have seen a larger and larger proportion of dead people by accident per day. Statistic has also shown a very alarming investigation about the traffic problem(... ).

Every year in our country, there are more than 12 000 people die and 9 300 injured from traffic accidents. The sum of the death and injury is nearly equal to the victim of the earthquake and tidal wave in Japan. It is also shown that every day in our motherland, more than 30 people die from traffic accidents.

It is the traffic problems that can widely seen everyday
just open a daily magazine and road accidents are always seen in them.
In our town, young people organize illegal race in the street, which causes danger to walker and drivers.
In addition, in several roads, the infrastructure hasn't been paid attention well by the
authority, and it is possible that the poor street condition reduce the driver's eyesight and accidents...

In many countries, even though students have been educated about traffic rules, some break the laws. For example, in the traffic light, many of us go through the light everyday. Many of us think that red-light running is not serious at all. But in fact, red-light runners cause hundreds of accidents as well as millions of dollars in damage (lost) . Each year, there are more nearly 200 000 people are injured involve red-light running.

{The increasing number of automobiles in our town also results in the air pollution.}
From these problems above, it seems to me that that not only does the authority take the responsibility but also everyone in our society must take actions immediately to stop the rise in traffic accidents.

The traffic problem in our city should be considered as one of the most important problems that must be solved immediately. In my oppinion, to reduce traffic accident , following measures should be taken immediately:

- I strongly believe that schools in our town should have more lessons about rules so that students can easily follow. And those who break the traffic rule should take more severe punishment in order to protect the others.

- Maximum and minimum the speed limits should be imposed on all roads
- Drivers should be forbiden to drink wine while driving
The facts shows us that many roads in our town are now in bad condition, they're flooded in rainy season. They 're all need reparing . We can't make sure that people 're safe if lots of road 's quality is still bad

It's totally possible to image our country's traffic system will be improved in the near future (with undergrounds, roads are built up above like many big city all around the world)

I hope that if the above-mentioned measures are strictly executed, the number of traffic jams and accidents will be diminished to a greater extent
If nobody were careless and broke the rule, there would be no accident in our town.
As a student, even though I cannot invest more money on developing infrastructure in our hometown, I can encourage my friends and my relatives to be more careful in the road. Moreover, I will criticize those who are not aware of the traffic problems. I can all so teach my youger brother in order to protect him form causing accident in the future. Though I cannot do everything, I am still ready to do everything to reduce the traffic problems.

In conclusion, though traffic trouble is very harmful to the nation's development.
It is clear that everyone must join hand to protect ourselves by learning and obey the traffic rules...

Many countries, including Vietnam, have recorded a significant increase in number of casualities by road accidents.


Statistics always show trends.
The recent statistics show an alarming trend.

U're from Vietnamese?

i'm vietnamese !! I think that the way I make sentences and the way I connect them is not ok ! I hope to recceive corrections from all of u

i'm vietnamese too :)