Very good editing by JangGemini!
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Everybody has/ All haveYour essay looks too crowded. As tip, I tell everybody who takes up IETLS or TOEFL, to leave a blank between paragraphs. Your examiner would be pleased if he gets to mark essays that are presented in a more neat and tidy manner.
So for me as I like to wake up early in the morning but I am not wake up every early morning. Sometime I wake up late and I stay late night for finished my work. When I wake up early morning I am happy to go walk with my dog. They have very fresh air as very quite as give me peace mind. On that morning I m very exciting to learn or do something. Its give me new energy to my ability. So I learn something in this morning that keeps long last in my mind. Also I want think positive and want to help for other people.
Here you do not provide a valid reason as to say why you support starting early. This is the essay structure you need to follow; Introduction, 2 body paras and the conclusion.
Introduction - introduce your topic & state your opinion
Body para1; Reason for your opinion & back it with a specific example.
Body para 2 - Reason + example
Conclusion - sum up everything said above