its compare\contrast essay is it good or what i need to edit?
Compare and contrast essays are difficult.
You need to revise the intro paragraph so that you are introducing 2 things: arguments for single sex ed, and arguments for coed education. Talk about these 2 things in the intro, and make the last sentence of the intro paragraph a sentence about the RELATIONSHIP between the two viewpoints.
Body paragraph 1: write about the argument for single sex ed
Body paragraph 2: write about the argument for coed education
Body paragraph 3 write about them both in the same paragraph.
Then, write a conclusion paragraph that talks again about the RELATIONSHIP between the two viewpoints.
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