Here are a few thoughts to get you started:
You have four different generations that you will be comparing. That makes things pretty tough! AND ... there is nothing on the Greatest Generation--the parents of the Boomers who fought in World War II. When I think of generations, I think: the Silent Generation, the Greatest Generation, the Baby Boomers, Generation X'ers, and then the Millennials.
Keep your capitalization consistent. There are places where you capitalize the names of the generations and other places where you do not. I prefer having the capitalization in an essay of this sort because it sets the subjects apart.
"Each generation goes further than the generation preceding it because it stands on the shoulders of that generation. You will have opportunities beyond anything we've ever known." (Reagan, 1981)
Are you using MLA style? Put the end punctuation on the other side of the parentheses--you need to keep your citation grouped with the sentence. It feels weird, but that is the way it is done.
I present the characteristics and experiences of the baby boomers and the generation
generation
sYou might want to start out the introduction to each generation by defining that generation. What is meant by Baby Boomer? (Those people born after the soldiers returned home from WWII until about 1964). Then go into the defining characteristics (prosperity, stay-at-home moms, suburbs, the advent of television and commercialization, the Cold War, and the Space Race).
The baby boomers were a persuasive generation that changed political and
ethical views
andthrough their various academic, cultural, industrial, and political activities.
They were living in the times of post-war and have fought for change because they were living in a period of time where the war on inequality was still predominant.
This sentence is awkward. Although Baby Boomers are defined as being born after WWII, you could not say that they were necessarily living in the times of post-war ... many of the Boomers fought in Vietnam while other protested the war. Maybe something like: Although World War II ended, Baby Boomers were not free from their own wars. Not only did they fight in Vietnam, but they fought for social justice.
In 1963, Martin Luther King Jr. voiced at a march with his now famous I have a dream speech in Washington at the Lincoln Memorial, where more than 300,000 multi-colored faces marched as one to protest for racial equality.
This is a sentence fragment. It is hard to believe--it is so long, it has to be a sentence. You don't give your verb the chance to finish though. Martin Luther King, Jr.
voiced ... Voiced what? Put the name of the speech in capitals and quotation marks. You can leave out "Washington" because it is assumed and it bogs down the sentence. I am not crazy about "multi-colored faces marched." First off, it looks like the faces are rainbow hued. Second, faces don't march. I'd rewrite it to look something like this: In 1963, Martin Luther King, Jr. voiced his "I Have a Dream" speech at the Lincoln Memorial, where more than 300,000 people marched as one to protest for racial equality.
They also fought against the war instigated against Vietnam because they were very active when it came to politics.
There has got to be a better way to word this--you don't want the reader to be confused between those members of the generation that fought in Vietnam and those who protested it at home. Try one of these:
Expressing their political beliefs, they protested against the war in Vietnam.
The Baby Boomers were politically active and protested against the war in Vietnam.
They were contemplated of their emphasize on freedom
I have no idea what you are trying to say here, but "contemplated" (thought out) is the wrong word.
and they banned employment discriminations in firms.
Discrimination would be singular, but I still don't like this construction because they didn't really ban employment discrimination and it wasn't just in firms. You could say: ... they fought for work place equality.
Moreover, they contributed in many ways towards modern technologies and several lives saving equipment.
You will need to expand on this. The Space Race? Precursors to the computer? "Lives saving equipment" doesn't work. You could say life-saving equipment or life-saving medical breakthroughs, but you really need to provide some kind of an example.
changed political and ethnical views
Maybe you mean "ethnical," I am not sure. Ethnical would be pertaining to ethnics--race, color, national origin, and creed type stuff. Ethics pertains to beliefs. "Ethnical" is not a very common word--my word-processing program doesn't recognize it.
Not only were
they a persuasive generation that changed political and ethnical views and various academic, cultural, industrial, and political activities, but the
baby bustBaby Boom generation was influenced by education and work ethics.
I only have the time to get this far. I hope that someone else will come along and pick up where I left off. Good luck with it!