A and B are C and D; which C are used to decribe A while D are used to decribe B. As I read it before from some articles, I am not sure whether it is correct here, so, discuss.
You mean here? ---> the processing time and the shelf life are shortenedand and lengthened tremendously/immensely with the help of modern technolgy
, such as advanced ... No, this is not good, because it is so confusing! Shortened and lengthened are opposites. You can write:
the processing time is shortened, and the shelf life is lengthened,
tremendously/immensely with the help of modern technolgy such as advanced...
tremendously or enormously would work, but actually most of the time adverbs weaken an essay. Kill your adverbs! :-)
Use commas to separate the words in " " marks.
Ultimately, we can say,
that ,"
Living without technology is like living without air," in this technical world of today.
No need for the word that.
:-)