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I prefer living in a small town; birds' chirping and singing


cindy_523 1 / -  
Dec 11, 2012   #1
The people prefer to live in a big city and others prefer to live in a small town. I would prefer a place is the small town to live in because it is very quiet, and friendly. A small town compare different from a big city.

Firstly of all, quiet in a Small Town:There no noise without disturb.Hearing birds' chirping and singing.Without none of an accident.Having good neighbors.

Secondly of all, Friendly:People who respect. A good folks around in a small town.Being to be nice.They are caring.

In Conclusion, That why the people like to move in a small town from a big city. The small town has no problem, and it is more peace. They love go to around in the small town.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Dec 11, 2012   #2
I would prefer a place is the small town to live in because it is very quiet, and friendly.

.... You have a few grammar issues here; pay attention to hte highlighted part above;
I would prefer a place in a small town to live because I like to be in a quiet and friendly environment.

I guess you are preparing for either IELTS or TOEFL. Though you have many grammar errors in your essay, it seems your essay structure is well aligned with what is expected by this task. Pay more attention to grammar;

Firstly of all

First of all or First,

quiet in a Small Town

A small town is generally very quiet.
korch 1 / 4  
Dec 12, 2012   #3
what is this essay for? I know the topic is from toefl's writing. If you write for toefl it should be min 300 words.


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