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Be positive when unemployed; People attending schools for many different reasons


mikoo4444 2 / 1  
Apr 8, 2014   #1
i think people transfer to college or university to pursue their objective in this life.
After high school people choose two different ways of life .There is student who will continue studying and get a degree in the field they would like to be than others who are not interested in school and start to live his way and work small jobs and enjoy they life earlier . The important is that the student who will go to college will have more experience and knowledge and easiest life after guaranty.

Being in a college is to share a beautiful social life with others students even have many girlfriends and friends .Life on compus make enjoy the life buy choosing your own classes and favorite sport that someone would like to share with others student and even participate to tournament with other college or university . Being a student have a lot of benefits in the future especially when someone have good grades.

in the other hand , life without college or university is not that bad but for sure not the same
First no friends from school that will influence u to always do better things and have better wide thinks
Second from the street nobody gonna give u knowledge than studying in college makes u discipline and behave like a professional ,being on time, now how to speak ,give a speech a even better writing skills

the third reason to go college ,is the chance to be an athlete and even participate to tournament is better than taking bad habit from the street like alcohol and cigaret and nowadays even drogss

In my view of conclusion going to college help the child in his future always with a lot of opportunities and even being positive and take it easy on everything can be possible even if there is no jobs .
OP mikoo4444 2 / 1  
Apr 8, 2014   #2
all right thank u :)
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Apr 10, 2014   #3
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