Topic:-People prefer to use their own transport nowadays. What could society do to encourage people to use public transport?
Utilization of private transportation is one of the major problems that the world is facing today. If immediate and consequences and measures are not taken to tackle this problem, the consequences would be unimaginable. However, in order to find right remedies firstly, the real reasons must be unearthed.
There are several factors responsible for great usage of private transportation. The most important reason for this problem is, it is becoming like a passion. Mostly youngsters use their own vehicles to showoff. In the same vein, travel on private transportation is largely attributed to avoid the environmental effects. To escape from the sun powerful rays and the acid rains, People are using their own transportation to reach their exact destination. Daily, lacks of vehicles are bought by the people in the world.
But how can this problem be countered? Firstly, I firmly believe that, government should increase the public transportation. Why because people may not have time to wait for the government vehicles. And also, People can travel by having a seat. On the same lines, it is strongly recommended that government should hike the petrol and diesel prices, and also reduce the prices of public transportation. By this, utilization of private vehicles will decrease and prefer public transportation.
Unless concerted and war-footed efforts are made to address the malady of surge in private vehicles use, there will be more traffic jams and burgeon of global warming.
it is good u could us some editing though
''The most important reason for this problem is, it is becoming like a passion. Mostly youngsters use their own vehicles to showoff.''
''Private transportation is a problem because most youngsters passionately use their own vehicles to showoff.''
''sun powerful rays''
''sun's powerful rays''
''utilization of private transportation''
''utilizing private transportation''
'If immediate and consequences and measures are not taken to tackle this problem, the consequences would be unimaginable.''
''if immediate measures are not taken...''
'' However, in order to find (the) right remedies firstly, the real reasons must be unearthed.''
get rid of firstly
pretty good just need to edit some
i hope my comments be useful
i would change the statements in paragraph three if i were you
firstly i firmly believe that government should improve public transportation. if buses don't arrive and depart bus stations on time, government should improve bus schedules. if vacant seat is not available to all passengers government should increase the number of buses.
